怎么说呢，就挺寄的。一眼难尽，追悔莫及。
当我还在接受义务教育的时候，我对英语没有什么概念。当我去三河二中做题的时候，英语只是故事汇和编码。当我到了XDU，别人都学四级学六级，考雅思托福的时候，我在摆烂我的英语课，现在，报应来了。当时都以为，现在翻译软件能解决大部分问题，后来写个长点的trans才发现，寄了啊，就感觉自己支支吾吾，跟孔乙己拍桌子一样，明明知道机翻的很怪，不知道怎么改。
虽然，现在有专门的润色机构，以及可以请一些专修英语的来帮忙润色，但作为把paper当成手段的日子里，总得自己留下点什么。这篇blog长期记录一些有的没的的英语写作语法糖，东隅已逝，桑榆非晚。
随着科技的发展，高中：With the development of technology,…
上位替代：As technology develops / improves by leaps and bounds, …
by leaps and bounds形容改善或进步迅速：
e. g: Facial-recognition technology is improving by leaps and bounds. Some commercial software can now tell the gender of a person in a photograph.
e. g: As AI technology improves by leaps and bounds, …
重要：高中：important
上位替代：vital significant essential crucial
principal(最重要的，首要的) primary(首要的，主要的)
表所以，因此：So(口语) Therefore(书面)
描述图表时：
用曲线或表格说明事实：show
e. g: The two figures show the accuracy of those tested model.
当对表格中的数字作出结论时：indicate
e. g: These figures indicate that our proposed model outperforms other baseline schemes.
当图表作为证明某事的证据时：illustrate
e. g: These figures illustrate the need for better extraction of feature vector.
当仅摆出来，让人看，有陈列之意时：display
在医学领域用的较多，用于display例如实验报告等详细信息，这些信息未必会在下文中全部提及，所以用display
说明理论事实时（一般很少有一张图后接demonstrate，这个词比较大）：demonstrate
e. g: In order to demonstrate that our contributions are largely orthogonal to the choice of a loss function, we also trained the same network using LSGAN loss instead of WGAN-GP loss.
举例子: 高中: for example / such as
基本就这么用:
e. g: Generative methods that produce novel samples from high-dimensional data distributions, such as images, are finding widespread use, for example in speech synthesis, image-to-image translation.
上位替代: 更丰富的一些用法是:
example作名词用于举例:
e. g: An/A well known/notable/classic/useful/important example of deep nerual network is CNN.
用动词形式exemplified:
e. g: This is exemplified in the work undertaken by Zhang et. al.
不明显的信号词:
e. g: ResNet is a good illustration of …
指出当前研究的不足:
这一段属于是必填项,用来总起故事,主要学逻辑:
e. g: Although these inorganic substructures can exhibit a high density of functional groups, such as bridging OH groups, and the substructures contribute significantly to the adsorption properties of the material, surprisingly little attention has been devoted to the post-synthetic functionalization of the inorganic units within MOFs.
e. g: Little is known, however, about the microstructure of this material.
e. g: So far, very little information is available, and only in the absorber film, not in the whole operational devices.
e. g: By far the most architectures have been prepared using a solution processed perovskite material, yet a few examples have been reported that have used an evaporated perovskite layer.
用来说明相反于/不同于：
e. g: On the contrary, mononuclear complexes, called single-ion magnets (SIM), have shown hysteresis…
e. g: In contrast, the compound has significantly…
e. g: In contrast to the structural similarity of these complexes, their magnetic behavior exhibits strong divergence.
e. g: Contrary to other conducting polymer semiconductors, carbon nitride is…
e. g: Unlike the spherical particles they are derived from that Rayleigh…
更新于2022-11-30
下面要整理一些在response环节会用到的话术：
在写response的开头，模板是：
Thanks very much for your valuable comments on our paper, The manuscript has certainly benefited from these insightful revision suggestions. In this revision, we have revised the Paper: xxx-num “ xxx yyy zzz” according to the reviewers’ comments and made a point-by-point response to these comments. Below are the changes we have made in our revised paper as well as responses to your comments. Thanks a lot for your consideration.
强调点对点，显得有诚意。
然后回答任何一个问题前，先表示感谢：
Thank the reviewer very much for indicating it.
Thanks for your constructive suggestion.
We appreciate the reviewer’s thoughtful suggestion.
如果问的问题是由于reviewer没读明白（作者没写清楚）：
Thanks the review for indicating it for an unclear description.
Thanks the review for careful reading.
如果reviewer问的问题是读了，然后问了较有深度的问题：
Thanks to the reviewer for your very careful reading and thoughtful question.
感谢完了，下面说的话使用last version和latest version/revised version来表示上个版本和提交的版本。
接下来就是”错了要立正，挨打要站稳“，挨个按照评论意见改。
下面给出几种经典问题的应对模板：
①”你的引用的方法太过时了“
显然，我只能撤掉相对较老的baseline，然后换新的。
Thanks for the reviewer’s constructive suggestion.(感谢) We apologize for the lack of consideration.(道歉) In this revised version, we have added two comparison methods in recent years (xxx [xx] in 20xx and xxx [xx] in 20xx) and removed the overly old method xxx.(介绍一下替换的method的情况)
The references for the two newly added comparison methods are as follow:
“10. aaa,bbb,ccc,ddd. balabalabala. IEEE Journal of xxxx 2019, 12, 1289–1298.”
“40. aaa,bbb,ccc,ddd balabalabala. IEEE Transactions on xxxx 2020, 58, 8465–8476.”
然后如果有必要，介绍一下新来的两种方法在introduction里的位置：
In the revised version, we have added the relevant introductions to the two new comparison methods in section.
In Sec.Ⅰ. Page 2. Line 73: “The authors in [10] filter the support vector machine classification maps to provide a high-quality reference and use the k-nearest neighbor method to define local regions and finally select the bands with the best classification performance.”
In Sec.Ⅰ. Page 2. Line 68: “Optimal neighborhood reconstruction (ONR) evaluates a band combination by assessing its ability to reconstruct the original data and applies a noise reducer to minimize the impact of the noisy bands [40].
最后别忘了说一下由于对照的方法变了，实验结果发生了变化：
Since two new comparison methods have been added, the corresponding experimental results will change. In the revised version, we have modified Table xx and Figure xx:
②”多来点引用“
一般这个意见会带来指向，会指出想要哪些的引用，这些引用可能是他写的或者他觉得这一块应该出现在论文里，照办就好：
e.g.1: Thanks for your constructive suggestion.(感谢) We are so sorry for not being so thorough as to forget the semisueprvised methods.(这是reviewer直接点名要半监督的办法) In this revised version, we add RLDA and some semisueprvised methods in the introduction:
然后下面贴在introduction里的位置：
In Sec. I. Page 2. Line xx : “………………”
③”你这个图大了小了/我看不清楚/这图画的不是很好理解/…/总之这个图给我重画“：
”照他说的做。“
Thank the reviewer very much for this constructive suggestion.(感谢) We are very sorry that the numbers and words in Figures 4 and 5 are so small that it is not clear.(道歉) In this revised version, we have modified Figure 4 and 5 as follows:
Before:(然后放一下之前的图)
After:(放一下修改以后的)
④”我不要你觉得，我要我觉得“
这种时候他会直接指出来”我想让这个改成什么样“，这时候直接：
We appreciate the reviewer’s thoughtful suggestion. In this revised version, we have made the following changes as per reviewer’s suggest. (我照你说的做了)
在分别给每个reviewer的response的最后，写段结束语，结束语模板如下：
Besides these revisions, we checked the paper carefully and corrected some cryptic and wrong statements to the best of my ability.(修正了typos) Moreover, we also checked the text and equations carefully to make them clear. Other revisions are denoted by red in the revised marked paper. We hope the paper could have gained in quality this time. Thanks very much for your consideration.
Finally we are very thankful to the anonymous review for his or her very useful suggestions and comments. We hope the paper could have made an improvement this time.
Best regards to you and your family.
